Wednesday, 25 October 2017

Explanation Writing!

IALT : tell you that i finish my explanation writing!
EXPLANATION TEMPLATE
Remember the S.E.E.E structure
S
Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a good scientist you need to be . . .
E
Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
E
Example - connect to the reader - for example...
E
Effect - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .

Title
This will start with HOW... or WHY...
Why do people travel?
Introduction
What are you going to explain?  How will you hook the reader in?
Today I  am going is explain why people travel.
Have you travelled before?  Have  you been on a plane?
What is the most interesting place you’ve gone to?
So this is my topic for today.

Paragraph One
What is your first statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
People travel because They want too see other cities towns or countries They want to experience other people's culture’. When I went to Rarotonga I visited my family first time in 7 years.
Paragraph Two
What is your second statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
People also travel to see/visit Their family. Some family live far away like in australia or cook island. So they have to travel. Seeing your family makes you feel happy.
Paragraph Three
What is your third statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
There are many  different  ways to travel on a plane .You can Fly catch a bus or a train you can even ride your bike a long  way to see a friend. The travelling part of the journey is exciting! Lifting off on a plane can be scary. I was scared when I lifted off to go to Rarotonga!.
Conclusion
The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.
I think I have explained why people travel . They travel to see other countries . They  travel to visit family . They travel just to see what it's to be like on a train or a plane. Travelling is a positive thing it can make you think the word is a huge plane and there are lot of different places to see and explore.
 

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