I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms Komor.
Tuesday, 31 October 2017
Thursday, 26 October 2017
Wednesday, 25 October 2017
Explanation Writing!
IALT : tell you that i finish my explanation writing!
EXPLANATION TEMPLATE
Remember the S.E.E.E structure
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Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a good scientist you need to be . . .
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Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
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Example - connect to the reader - for example...
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Effect - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .
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Title
This will start with HOW... or WHY...
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Why do people travel?
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Introduction
What are you going to explain? How will you hook the reader in?
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Today I am going is explain why people travel.
Have you travelled before? Have you been on a plane?
What is the most interesting place you’ve gone to?
So this is my topic for today.
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Paragraph One
What is your first statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
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People travel because They want too see other cities towns or countries They want to experience other people's culture’. When I went to Rarotonga I visited my family first time in 7 years.
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Paragraph Two
What is your second statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
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People also travel to see/visit Their family. Some family live far away like in australia or cook island. So they have to travel. Seeing your family makes you feel happy.
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Paragraph Three
What is your third statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
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There are many different ways to travel on a plane .You can Fly catch a bus or a train you can even ride your bike a long way to see a friend. The travelling part of the journey is exciting! Lifting off on a plane can be scary. I was scared when I lifted off to go to Rarotonga!.
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Conclusion
The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end. This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.
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I think I have explained why people travel . They travel to see other countries . They travel to visit family . They travel just to see what it's to be like on a train or a plane. Travelling is a positive thing it can make you think the word is a huge plane and there are lot of different places to see and explore.
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